Literacy Presentation

Peaceful Communities Presentation

"Patterns In Nature" By Pamela Rushby

We were learning about Patterns in Nature.  I learned that there are patterns everywhere.

Techniques Gallery

Live, Work and Play Safely” by Heather Hammonds.

I am learning to make a rules chart about a sports.

I am so proud of being able to do this task about Rugby in class.

It can be tricky to find rules about the Rugby that are easy to do.

My buddy can help me by giving me ideas  for rules about Rugby to do it about.

The next step for me in my learning is to get more Rugby rules.

Peace Poem.

 

I am learning to write a Poem about Peace One Day using my senses.

I am so proud of being able to describe what Peace feels like, tastes like and sounds like.

It can be tricky to describe the senses.

The thesaurus can help me by giving me interesting words to use.

The next step for me in my learning is to write a more interesting poem.

ANZAC Recount Success Criteria

The Death Zone

It’s 2 a.m in the morning of April 25th 1915. I was scared. My knees were shaking. So was all of my friends. I was sitting the middle of the landing boat. I was holding my gun like it was the last bit of food in the world.

Suddenly my friend Perez got shot in the head.  His brains splattered all over the landing boat and me. I whispered to goodbye to my  mate.

Then I heard a bullet fly past my head and hit my other  friend in the chest. Then “BOOM”.  Hundreds of bullets come flying around our boat. I felt a sharp pain in my right arm. I grabbed my gun and started shooting.I was about to enter the Death Zone.By Denzel

I am learning to write an interesting recount.

I am so proud of making my recount interesting by using similes and adjectives.

It can be tricky to write in past tense.

My buddy can help me by checking my work.

The next step for me in my learning is to find an interesting topic for me to write about.